Wednesday, May 25, 2011

Sorry I couldn't make it. Critique would be awesome, thanks. (Story summary on bottom)

So this short is about two rival tooth fairies trying to get the "Fairy of the Month" thats coming up. Thing is the protagonist (skinny nerdy one) has won it for years now. So the main fairy (the fat one) goes out and has a montage of him flying to different houses. Then he makes it back to the Fairy HQ and deposits his teeth that he has collected. He is still a bit too short and the time is almost up for the end of the month. He risk going out when the sun is almost out and makes to a final house and doesn't get enough teeth from the kid. He finds pliers and hovers over the kid. Then he makes it back but is still a bit short. Then he looks at the pliers and it cuts to his picture put on the wall of Fairy of the Month smiling with no teeth.

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